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can you stop the tears that fall
will i ever be able to stand tall
with every day comes a sy
the big dark place i sit and cry
outside smiling inside sad
the looks i get makes me mad
this illness i have will it ever go
no just have to go with the flow
can anyone stop the tears that fall
and does anyone really hear my call
a sad and lonley place to be
when will some one help me
 

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Hey Donna :wavey:

:thanx: that is a lovely poem but it is so true, i am sure alot will read it and think that the poem was writen for them.

Thanks again, take care :hug: Jo :hug:
 

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thanks for that jo

its funny i can only right poems wen im down cant put 2words together wen im well :)


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Hi Ya Donna

Bless big hug and tissues 4 us both

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Hi Donna

It is very beautiful for sure and at the same time so sad.I been feeling a little down myself today and i also think there will ne alot of us fellow lupies that feel that way to.We cant let this disease defeat us though.I do like this poem to but hoping you can write some while you are happy:)also.Thanks for the poem.

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Hi Donna,

Coming from someone who has spent years writing poetry.....I LOVE THIS.

Good job and indeed it left me thinking.

Your not alone in how you feel my friend.:wink2:
 

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this is a bad sign wen i write poems i no its so easy to write them 5mins it took me to write this 1 not a good sign the big D is comin after me :(


D=depression



thanks for your very nice messages
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Oh dear donna ((((((hugs))))))

A beautiful poem but, like me, you write them when you're sad. I have terrible trouble getting any words out unless I am.

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Wow Donna that is a great poem and so so true I think we can all relate to that. I definitely put a lump in my throat!!!
 

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:) I love that

Thank you for sharing your talent :)


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