[Marshmellow]

Poetry is my form of therapy,don't often get inspiration but yesterday I did so here goes...hope you like it

It may look like I'm coping,
but inside I'm actually grieving.

It may look like I'm smiling,
But inside I'm actually weeping.

It may look like I'm all together,
But inside I'm actually breaking.

You may think that I'm strong ,
and walk away without me

But please see that I'm shaking ,
and continue on beside me.

Rachel

 

[debatat]

What a lovely poem Rachel, you have a real talent. It does capture how you and a lot of us feel. Thank you for sharing that.

Deb x

 

[Katharine]

Very good Rachel and well said.

Katharine

 

[karen.w.]

Ah that's lovely Rachel, wow that really struck a chord in me!
that's exactly how I have felt this year, until recently..but as usual I just put on my happy brave face each day

thanks for sharing rachel xx

 

[keebler]

Very nice Rachel. You are very talented.

Love Lyn

 

[Sage Hen]

Love it Rachel!

I love poetry..

Thanks for sharing your talent with us.

 

[Lily]

That's me to a T Rachel I don't know why I continue to do it, I think it helps me to cope but it can work against us sometimes

love
Lily

 

[pollianna]

yeah, captures the whole thing, well done xxx

 

[donna kosk]

well what i can i say its a really good poem im still at that point at the moment and its so true


thanks for sharing your poem
donna

 

[KarolH]

Thank you for sharing this with us. I just LOVE poetry and have for many years now. I have been writing poems since the late 1970's while going through the teenage years and having feelings of hormonal rage.:lol::lol::lol:

I have kept a book of all that I have written and look back on it from time to time. Ahhhhhhhhhhhh, the memories it brings me are wonderful.

I hope your doing well today.:wink2::wink2::wink2: